rene Posted November 24, 2015 Report Share Posted November 24, 2015 Hello fellow users of Daminion and Daminion Sevrer. I published a new article on LinkedIn Pulse about Daminion and Daminion Server. I invite everybody to kindly open the link and to read it. It would be awesome though, if you could comment, and like the Article as well as sharing the article to your network! https://www.linkedin...=mp-author-card Thank you very much, René! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacal Posted November 24, 2015 Report Share Posted November 24, 2015 Typo: In sentence that begins with "And, as if that weren't enough, the Advanced Search ...", there is an unnecessary forgotten "the", I would say ("allows the you to locate"). The same sentence can also illustrate my only, completely personal, remark; the style of your text resembles the language of commercials a little too much for my taste. Thanks, have a nice day! Mart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rene Posted November 24, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2015 Hello Jacal, thanks for that! I had it approved by an english native, but I'm gonna check it though gonna check it though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lintujuh Posted November 25, 2015 Report Share Posted November 25, 2015 Hi René! I added my like to your article, but I also felt that the text was more an advertisement than an article. -Juha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rene Posted November 26, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2015 Hello Juha, thanks for liking it. I know, the way I wrote it, it sounds a lot like advertisement, but I had no idea on how to do it differently. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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